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PostSubject: Konachan Yuki l Water God Slayer {DONE}   Tue Dec 25, 2012 12:00 pm

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Name: Konachan Yuki
Alias: Kona, slayer, water devil
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Birthdate: 25 December
Sexuality: Straight
Special Characteristics: Konachan Yuki can breathe in water. She cannot be drown in sea or any substances.

Personality:

Charms and Patience

Yuki seductive smiles and twinkling eyes usually lure people what she want them to believe; innocent and harmless. Her charms work very well, afterall, she is a chic, yet grateful and genteel. She is quite active in social and a high-spirited girl who is unchallengeable ruler in society. Yuki is usually nice to people and is quite patient in conversation. She works on her patience on knowing more about strangers. She never let her feelings show on her face; she never let her guard down.

Anger and Stubbornness

However, if she goes berserk due to being annoyed or irritated, she can be quite a nightmare. People wasting her time are what she hates most and she tries to avoid these people as much as she could. Annoying people ticks her totally off and she doesn't need any more deeper reason. She elucidates everyone that she won’t harm unless the opponent challenges her or started a fight. Nevertheless, if these people start to annoy her a lot, Yuki never promises she won’t hurt them. As she is a god slayer, she never let other people win over her. She loves to be top of everything she does, it’s all she cares. She is stubborn and she does everything on her own way, she doesn’t believe other people. Nobody is to be trusted, that’s what she believes in. Yes, she is resistant, difficult, and persistent in an opinion, task or idea.

Canny and quick-witted

Due to Yuki’s experiences in her past, she is very mature despite her age. She is clever; both physically and mentally. Yuki’s appearance shows she is kind of fragile and weak, that’s one of Yuki’s sly advantages. However, Yuki is a strong fighter but she loves to take every advantage she can get. She can also read emotions that passes through people’s face. She is afterall, quick-witted. She knew how to interpret the emotions and twisted meaning.

Manners

Yuki is polite to elders and kind to youngsters. She is usually a smiley girl but she is totally serious. Smiling doesn’t mean she isn’t serious. Smiling is just one of her distraction to others. She is not very friendly to strangers but she is nice enough to do pleasantry conversation. However, she never let anyone overrule her or let them command her. Yuki never follows other people command unless it’s her guild master’s command. She believes she is best in what she does and she doesn’t allow anyone to lead. She prefers leading than following. She believes that other people will slow her down and she doesn’t trust anyone. She believes in herself and not others. She is proud in what she does, whether people calls her selfish or not, she doesn’t care what other people say.

Likes:

  • Winter: As her birthday was in December and the main thing is she loves snow. She loves the way how snow caresses her face and the cool winter breeze warms her heart.


  • Traveling: Yuki loves to travel and she usually travels a lot. She studies cultures, boosts up her knowledge and skills through her travels.


  • Sea: As she was Water God Slayer, so she loves being near to sea which calms and gives her confidence. She loves the sensation of being in the sea or having contact with water, not just sea.


  • Magic : She loves her magic and she would do anything not to give up on it. Her magic is what make her a god slayer and her magic is her pride.

Dislikes:

  • Dirt: Dirt is dirty as simple as that, Yuki does not like herself to be covered in dirt or mud, she thinks dirt contains bacteria which is unhealthy.


  • Noises: Noises such as drilling, screeching voice and screaming sounds are too loud for Yuki. She doesn’t mind loud music but Yuki is just too sensitive with noises and sounds that are unpleasant.


  • Insects or Slimy creatures: She fears slimy creatures and dirty creatures which might even carry diseases. They are disgusting; Yuki didn’t think anybody will like those slimy things.


  • Annoying people: Annoying people gets on her nerves and she totally hates annoying people. By annoying people, she meant to people who kept nagging her, repeating non-sense words wasting her time, gossiper. What Yuki hates most is wasting time so anyone wasting her time annoys and irritates her and she hates those kind of people.


Motivations:

  • Determination and Promises: She wanted to be the coolest and strongest mage in Fiore. This is her pride she kept and surely she wanted to win not defeated. Thus she wanted to be strongest in Fiore and coolest. Also, her promise with her goddess have to do with this: she promised her she will never let the goddess down and this meant she got to be better good at what she do.


  • Avenging for the beloved people: She wanted to avenge for Suki's family and she wanted to get on with her new life and forget everything about her past. Yes, she promised Suki's family too, so yes, these are totally what motivates her. She never broke her promises, so even this meant her life, she would try to succeed it.


Fears:

  • Being defeated: Yuki hates to be defeated, she loves to win everything. It’s not a selfishness or anything, it’s just her dignity and pride she cares. This is all she have after all the experiences she had. She would never bow and this is her instinct.


  • Being alone: Yuki spent her eight years alone despite the goddess so she didn't want to be alone again.


  • JellyFish: Yuki used to train her magic underwater so Yuki used to stay in sea and she usually encounter with Jellyfish so she felt disgusted to these jellyfish.


General Appearance


Height: 5'7
Weight: 118 lb
Hair: Pink
Eyes: Sea Blue
Skin Tone: Fair
Appearance:

Konachan Yuki is a beautiful and attractive girl with a nice and slender figure and the height of 5’7”, which you can say tall for a girl. Yuki’s calm sea blue eyes show nothing but purity and innocence. But if you gaze into it, you will find it quite irresistible and her long lashes are very attractive. Her hot pink hair flows naturally around her face and arms; they are shiny and smooth, just like silk. Yuki has a fair skin tone and people usually tell her, she looks like a porcelain doll because she does not has any wounds or scars. Yuki’s face is very spotless and beautiful without needing any special treatment. Yuki also have dimples which make her attractive when she smiles. Yuki usually dresses herself with evening gown or dress which are very fashionable. Yuki loves accessories such as hair bands and rings which are designed by roses or shells, as long as it is beautiful and cool. Yuki usually paints her finger nails that matched her clothes and changes the colors from time to time. Yuki appearance is above average, and most people admired and envied Yuki a lot.

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Guild: Tartaros
Tattoo: Left Arm, color of her eyes
Rank: D

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Face Claim: Megurine Luka from Vocaloid


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PostSubject: Re: Konachan Yuki l Water God Slayer {DONE}   Thu Dec 27, 2012 6:15 am

Welcome to the application process. I'd like to get started right away, but first, I want to extend a thank you for your time and effort.

I would like to remind you that the magic you are going for requires heavy scrutiny and critical reviewing. Thus, I, your critique shall guide you along the way and ensure we both get the application we seek.

Personality: Alright. You have a pretty thick personality here, but what we need is some elaboration. How does Yuki talk to people? What does she find annoying or irritating (great chance to flesh out dislikes and likes using the personality). I want to know what makes her tick. Why is she nice to people? what are her views or motives? Is she always happy? how is she while in situations that are serious? All that good stuff. You can separate the parts to pin point each accurately as well. As that makes it easier to dive into.

motivation & fears: The motivation needs a lot of elaboration. Why does she want to be the coolest mage in fiore? How does she plan to reach that goal? How does she intend to find out about her past by doing this? How exactly does this drive her? [You can thicken the likes and dislikes too if you want. I will enjoy it personally.]

History: This really needs some work to effectively correlate with the character. Too much is simply left out. In her personality you say she up to date with fashion. How? what happened after her accident? Was she taught in the ocean? Got a foster family? How does she buy her clothes? How does she stay in touch and updated? Can we learn a bit about her training? What did she do with godess? Did the godess leave suddenly? Why is she in a dark guild? Why did she join the guild? How did she join the guild?

Actually, you mentioned her "resurfacing" at the end. So In that case we really need to know where she was and how she survived. How she managed to forget her past suddenly and much more. Just take your time and makebsure everything blends.

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PostSubject: Re: Konachan Yuki l Water God Slayer {DONE}   Sat Dec 29, 2012 2:08 am

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PostSubject: Re: Konachan Yuki l Water God Slayer {DONE}   Mon Dec 31, 2012 2:03 pm

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When she goes berserk, she’s worse than other people. She elucidates everyone that she won’t harm unless the opponent challenges her or started a fight. She rarely gets angry but if she’s angry, that’s because she encounters with annoying people; people wasting her time for non-sense or people who look down on Yui totally ticks her off. However, she usually ignores or avoids these type of people, she want nothing to do with them.

She's worse than other people, you say - is this the average irritation/rage of a person? WHat makes her go berserk? Is it a lot of exposure to the things that make her mad (such as annoying people as you listed above) or is it something deeper? An inner moral standard, perhaps?

Also, you say she is kind but not friendly - she never lets her emotions show, nor does she trust anyone... THen how is she kind? Please list examples - as it stands, I find her being more cold and cruel that nice. Imo, you can be either moderately nice/angry/sad/etc for an all-around "jack of all traits" emotion-wise (someone who is a little of everything but not one emotion stands out) OR you can be pulled to the extremes in one or two emotional areas - here, you leave me confused as to what exactly you are.

History:

Who is Suki? You mention them multiple times, but I haven't the faintest idea who exactly this person is. Is he/she a random person you live with? Is she the goddess? Was Suki murdered with his/her family? What happened to the goddess? Surely a few mages couldn't kill a goddess...

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PostSubject: Re: Konachan Yuki l Water God Slayer {DONE}   Tue Jan 01, 2013 3:19 am

~ It is already stated in History that "The goddess left Yuki to let her stand on her own legs, the goddess couldn't help more than she had. The goddess had done her part so she left." and as for Suki, yes, I stated there that, Suki is a family who kept her under shelter.

~ As for personality, I rewrote it. I hope it's correct form this time.


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PostSubject: Re: Konachan Yuki l Water God Slayer {DONE}   Wed Jan 02, 2013 9:44 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Konachan Yuki l Water God Slayer {DONE}   Thu Jan 03, 2013 1:40 am

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